In this story, rather than using moon, sun, etc, I will give them names. I will give personal attributes to each character. I will detail the happenings of their exile. I will create a more descriptive example of what the pond and the water fairy looked like. I will add dialogue to every part of the story to add in some personality and substance to the characters. I will also create a more dramatic and exciting reunion. To be honest, a am favoring some of my other reading posts for my next storytelling.
THE PRINCES AND THE WATER-SPRITE
Maude Barrows Dutton
(Pond.Taken from goodfreephotos.)
THE PRINCES AND THE WATER-SPRITE
Maude Barrows Dutton
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