The Sandy Road
I like the setting that this story is already in. So, maybe I focus on adding dialogue and character qualities? I think that this story needs to have a more panicked reaction to the lack of supplies. I also would like to give a more grandfatherly figure to the man who gives the advice not to give up. If I ended up wanting to change the setting, I could always make it about a sports team who had something happen like losing a player to injury or something of that nature, and they "cant give up."
Babbitt. Jataka Tales.
I like the setting that this story is already in. So, maybe I focus on adding dialogue and character qualities? I think that this story needs to have a more panicked reaction to the lack of supplies. I also would like to give a more grandfatherly figure to the man who gives the advice not to give up. If I ended up wanting to change the setting, I could always make it about a sports team who had something happen like losing a player to injury or something of that nature, and they "cant give up."
Babbitt. Jataka Tales.
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